Friday, October 29, 2010

sensory rejection

was only a frigid reminder.
i colored all the letters in
and whited out my name.

in the dark -i don't recall how often-
i turned over to see who,
pulling her hair from my face,
and wondered -almost aloud-
if she could taste you


Tiffany said...

that last line is show stopper. i love it.

seth elkins said...

glad you dig it!!